3 Mistakes that KILLED Star Wars: Attack of the Clones (Writing Advice)
Learn why Star Wars Episode II failed. Hint: it's more than just the bad dialogue. https://youtu.be/TRCRPB_2oLs
3 Mistakes that KILLED Star Wars: The Phantom Menace (Writing Advice)
Learn why Star Wars Episode I failed. Hint: it goes well beyond Jar Jar. https://youtu.be/7IwZvDrSULk